Reviews Chp.8


Reviews for: Inazuma Eleven! Disaster Zone!
 radioisotopes 5/15/11 . chapter 8
Entries not allowed:

-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.

or two liners.

: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.

form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.

Chat/script format, self inserts and interactive stories are not allowed. You can take the dare submission to your profile, and change the format. As for the self insert, take yourself out of the story.

-Radioisotopes

Critics United
 XSoulResonanceX 5/4/11 . chapter 8
Miyako: *Rolls on floor laughing* That was hilarious!

Selim: How did we get rich in the first place?

Sota: I think it was from our Truth or Dare show... after all, it was the very first one created.

Miyako: That is true. But we only did it for entertainment purposes, not profit!

Selim: Anyway, we got more dares.

DARES!

- We dare all boys who look like girls (*Cough* Aphrodi, Midorikawa, Sakuma, Gazelle, etc. *cough*) to dress up in maid outfits to sit on their crush's lap and french kiss them.

- We dare Tsunami to shout that he hates the ocean. Use forceful action if he resists.

- We dare the top ten IE characters with the most fangirls to be set dangling above a sea of fangirls. They have a limited time to escape, if they don't make it, you may cut the chord that holds them.
 Mikayla.V 4/24/11 . chapter 8
lolz i'm laughing so much right now.

1. i love mark kruger, can i hug him?

2. i hate Fudou's hair so i dare Kidou to shave it while stuffing zombie [ what is he afraid of again? Tomatoes?] into his mouth, tie him to the chair, Kidou use a chain saw please.

3. i dare hiroto to burn down the sun garden into his alien costume, kick Yagami in the face [ i don't like her? ], make burn and gazelle kiss each other and burn heat's and nepper's hair during the process ;D

4. Fideo i dare you to go cussing to the entire team that you hate them, their wimps and you think their weak and that you could be a one man team [hey, it's an experiment okay].

5. Dylan throw a disco party and force everyone to wear a pink wig [including YUU but not Flo, she gets to have a special talk with Rika alone with her bazooka for protection].

5. Flo, use rika like a target during Dylan's 5 hour disco party. I hate rika cause she reminds me of hotdogs [her lips in a way scares me] so give me a got show please.

6. Natsumi, i dare you to scale a 700feet tall wall wearing your boots and white dress [caution, keep yuu away please] if she does not she must pay the host and me US$ i'm rich ;D.

7. Last dare, Natsumi and Gouenji go to paris for a date. hehehe [they have a grandson together according to the fifth movie]?

Bonus: All IE members must do the russain dance [how long before your knees give out?] First person to give up must be Flo's personal slave for the next chapter, second person must pretend to be glued to the guest star, third must rob a bank and give me all the money, if you get caught you go to jail 'kay?.
 MizuKi-chan-18 4/23/11 . chapter 8
My kisses what? *goes to a super emo corner to draw circles with my finger* why... I CAN'T BE LOVED! DX WHY THE HELL KAZEMARU HUGS (chap 125) AND CRIES (chap 126) FOR ENDOU-BAKA AND DON'T SHOW ANY AFFECTION TO ME! TT-TT If he loves me I promise to not be bad with you... but FORGIVE ME DARLING! (Rika )

hahhaa On with the chapter... well for the safety of EVERYONE you should NOT LET Sota to get closer less than 65 Km of you! (except for the dares ushishishishishi XD) And Mwahahahhaa you sure almost given a heart-attack to Hiroto! XDD

keep it up, Please! You RULE! *bows* Flo-sama, Yuu-kun!

PS: Flo, I'm sorry if my friend SaneTand (the user who uploaded that video that put you so emo) put you Emo XDD It wasn't his intention... FORGIVE HIM! PLEASE! or watch his videos x3
 shef01animetizeGoneM.I.A 4/23/11 . chapter 8
fUNNY AS ALWAYS!

Kogure *throttling him* Gouenji is NOT DUMB! Just because he is a blond doesn't MEAN that he is!

It's always nice to see this fic updated! :)

No comments:

Post a Comment